Musings of an Aspiring Author and Poet
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Sting of Scorching Sands (Haiku)
Sting of scorching sands
Turning silica to glass
Natures melting pot
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Crystal and Fine Wines (Senryu)
Crystal and fine wines
Regalia of the snooty
The harder they fall
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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~
Prompt: Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie – Heeding Haiku with HA: Improving Our Haiku #2
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AUTHOR’S NOTE: Since I had never intentionally written a senryu I thought Ha’s prompt this week might be the perfect opportunity to try…so here it goes.
Are the 2 haikus resonate each other?
Yoshiko
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The haiku is supposed to have an emphasis on the seasons / nature while the senryu is to highlight something about the human condition. I don’t know if I succeeded in doing this, but I tried. :)
I see :)
Thanks Dom, I had to check the link so hopefully I’ve learnt something. Seems to me you met the criteria beautifully!
Thank you Gilly, I hope that I did. :)
Wonderful!
Thank you so much. :)
Thanks, outstanding work
I love these Dom! You should try senryu more often!
They take more effort (not that I mind) than what I had originally though they would. I rather enjoyed it. :)
And the addiction starts — mwah ha ha ha!
No really — I do hope you write more of them. :)
I’m certain that I will thanks to your diabolical urging. :)
Shall I give you another evil cackle? ;)
Looking forward to them!
Please do. :)
Mwah ha ha ha ha!!!!! >:D
Thank you…thank you very much. :)
Ahhhh…. that felt good. ;)
Dom DiFrancesco 
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