Dom DiFrancesco

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Blue Skies And Fair Winds (Senryu)

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Blue skies and fair winds

Pure harmony of nature

A lesson to learn

 

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

 

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6 responses to “Blue Skies And Fair Winds (Senryu)”

  1. Lucid Gypsy Avatar
    Lucid Gypsy

    Perfect haiku, ticks all the boxes!

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you so much Gilly, you are probably right in calling it a haiku.

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  2. Lucid Gypsy Avatar
    Lucid Gypsy

    Oh I see I got that wrong its a senryu!

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      I suppose that it could be either one, there was the opening with nature, but I attempted to related to the human condition. Perhaps I was wrong to call it a senryu. Now I’m not sure what it should have been. :)

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  3. Tiny Avatar
    Tiny

    Harmony is indeed a lesson to learn. Beautiful.

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    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar
      Dom DiFrancesco

      Thank you Tiny, I very much enjoyed writing this one. :)

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