Sunset Walks With Friends (Tanka)

Sunset walks with friends

Through familiar neighborhoods

The peace of friendship

Never needing to wear masks

To hide who we really are

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

Comments

6 responses to “Sunset Walks With Friends (Tanka)”

  1. amoafowaa Avatar

    Nice.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much. :)

  2. Heather's Starting End Avatar

    Another form :) I enjoyed this!!!!!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I’m glad Heather, it isn’t really much different than the haiku/senryu just two more lines of 7 syllables each. You should give it a try, I’m sure you would be great at it. :)

  3. Nicodemas Avatar

    Yes! Just wonderful!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thanks Nicodemas, I appreciate that. :)

Leave a comment

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.