Shaken From a Dream (Senryu)

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8 responses to “Shaken From a Dream (Senryu)”

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   sueddie

   April 21, 2015

   Sometimes I think the borderline between the two is so thin… How sure are we that we are not asleep? :)

   I love the form and structure. It punches and gives much to munch on. Well done Sir!

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      Dom DiFrancesco

      April 28, 2015

      I apologize for not responding to your comment in a timely fashion. I was going through my spam comments and yours wound up in there. Anyway, I agree, the line is very thin indeed and therefore how can any of us be sure that we are not asleep. Well said sir, thank you.

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         sueddie

         April 28, 2015

         Thank you, Sir.
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   Elle

   April 21, 2015

   yes, which!?

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   Dan Antion

   April 22, 2015

   Sometimes, it is hard to know for sure.

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      Dom DiFrancesco

      April 22, 2015

      Absolutely, I think we forget that we are all human.

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   Sonya

   April 24, 2015

   Got me thinking.. Can’t stop the thoughts now..

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      Dom DiFrancesco

      April 24, 2015

      I’m glad, it is nice when poetry does that. Thank you for saying so. :)

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