August 4, 2013 I Loved You Deeply – A Tanka 8 Comments I loved you deeply Only to be cast aside As I showed my age Tossed away like an old shoe Worn thin by many miles ~ ~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~ Share this: Click to share on X (Opens in new window) X Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest Click to share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email Click to print (Opens in new window) Print Like Loading... Related Posted by Dom DiFrancesco in Poetry Tagged: heartbreak, heartbroken, left, love, poem tanka, poetry, pushed aside, sad, separated
yep know the feeling, traded in for 10 yr younger model… what was i but domestic slave and ‘surrogate’ mother, babysitter …bitter moi? Reply
It is sad, no one should ever have to be treated that way. I know they (whomever “they” are) say that “what goes around comes around”, but sadly I’m never around to see it happen. Reply
me neither. I am skeptical sometimes. I see ‘bad’ people prosper and keep going strong and the ‘good’ die young or suffer. Well not all but too many.
I love this.
Thank you very much. :)
yep know the feeling, traded in for 10 yr younger model… what was i but domestic slave and ‘surrogate’ mother, babysitter …bitter moi?
It is sad, no one should ever have to be treated that way. I know they (whomever “they” are) say that “what goes around comes around”, but sadly I’m never around to see it happen.
me neither. I am skeptical sometimes. I see ‘bad’ people prosper and keep going strong and the ‘good’ die young or suffer. Well not all but too many.
Unfortunately this is the way it has always been and will likely always be, sad, but true.
This is so sad:(
I find it sad when this happens and unfortunately it happens far too often.