June 3, 2013 First Love – A Tanka 7 Comments First love of the heart Naive possibilities Unrepentant joy Ignorant of the danger Until it has been shattered ~ ~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~ Share this: Share on X (Opens in new window) X Share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest Share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit Email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email Print (Opens in new window) Print Like Loading... Related Posted by Dom DiFrancesco in Poetry Tagged: broken, first love, heart, heartbreak, heartbroken, ignorant, love, naive, poem, poetry, shattered, tanka
I never thought of it that way (at least the rocket launcher piece), but I think you might be right. :) Reply
Sometimes every love is like the first one and when they end it is liking hitting your thumb with the hammer. :) Reply
And you couldn’t have said it better! Loved it!
Thank you very much, I so glad that you enjoyed it. :)
:-) It was beautifully written. I had to!
Love really is a battlefield and everyone’s armed with rocket launchers.
I never thought of it that way (at least the rocket launcher piece), but I think you might be right. :)
you hit the nail on the head – pounded it!
Sometimes every love is like the first one and when they end it is liking hitting your thumb with the hammer. :)