June 3, 2013 First Love – A Tanka 7 Comments First love of the heart Naive possibilities Unrepentant joy Ignorant of the danger Until it has been shattered ~ ~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~ Share this: Click to share on X (Opens in new window) X Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest Click to share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email Click to print (Opens in new window) Print Like Loading... Related Posted by Dom DiFrancesco in Poetry Tagged: broken, first love, heart, heartbreak, heartbroken, ignorant, love, naive, poem, poetry, shattered, tanka
I never thought of it that way (at least the rocket launcher piece), but I think you might be right. :) Reply
Sometimes every love is like the first one and when they end it is liking hitting your thumb with the hammer. :) Reply
And you couldn’t have said it better! Loved it!
Thank you very much, I so glad that you enjoyed it. :)
:-) It was beautifully written. I had to!
Love really is a battlefield and everyone’s armed with rocket launchers.
I never thought of it that way (at least the rocket launcher piece), but I think you might be right. :)
you hit the nail on the head – pounded it!
Sometimes every love is like the first one and when they end it is liking hitting your thumb with the hammer. :)