Dark and exposed after eons under the sculptor’s chisel
Laid naked to the elements and the seasons
Sharp, jagged and formidable, few dare confront you
Either out of fear or rightful respect
~~
A few fools dare scale your rocky crags in quest of your treasures
Cutting deep into your subterranean veins
Drawing out your blood and secrets through violent means
Leaving hollows only to be left abandoned once bled dry
~~
Still this does not detract from the adoration of your admirers
The saguaros raise their arms to the sky in praise
Brave faced monolith, you offer comfort in spite of the desecration
Providing shelter to those that dwell under your protection
~~
Your strength and bravery are none diminished
Inspite of the riches stolen from your purse you hold your head high
Taking revenge on those with careless intentions
Showing no remorse in light of the pains you’ve endured
~~
It could be said that nature has been cruel to you
Yet you have not taken this to heart
Your life can not be counted in mere mortal years
Since you have outlived those that laid claim to your precious abundance
~~
Our prayer is that your future holds you in appreciation and respect
No more to cut and scar your rough hewn beauty
You are a wonder to behold
To be looked upon with reverence as the creator intended
~~ D. R. DiFrancesco ~~
Great poem. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
Thank you very much. I appreciate the kind words. :)
Very good. The wordplay is excellent.
Thank you, I’m glad that you enjoyed it.
I like how your poems are becoming more ambitious in both subject and structure. I hope you continue to write like this, I really enjoyed it.
Thank you Jeremy, I’m glad that you enjoyed it, being nature themed I thought that you might. :) The thing I have been struggling most with lately is in fact what topics to write about, and as I am coming to realize nature provides almost a limitless supply of subjects. Be well my friend.