Speckled with the blood of lies,
Blindly consumed by your feigned sincerity.
You said you loved me,
Sealing it with a tender kiss,
Only to pierce my lip with your fangs.
The trickle,
Wet and metallic,
Oxidizing on my tongue
Nauseates me to the core.
Sickening,
Sweet,
Irony,
Descriptively you.
Pledging passion and fidelity
Then pillaging my love,
Disemboweling my trust,
Leaving a heartbroken corpse.
~
~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~
I could identify with these words
I’m glad, thank you very much.
You write dark thoughts very good. The words you choose carry your intent. Good piece.
Thank you very much. I actually enjoy writing the dark pieces a great deal and will likely do many more of them.
You should, it seems to be your talent at its core.
Thank you very much WB, I think I will. I have one that I did a few weeks ago that I have yet to publish.
very strong piece. very.
Thank you, I don’t write this type of piece very often, but I did enjoy writing it. :)
It seems darkness has come for you and you rocked the joint lol I love it.
Thank you very much, I glad that you liked it. :)