Envy – A Tanka

The look on your face

Hinting of true sarcasm

Though your words are kind

Words can not hide the envy

And contempt that you harbor

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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

3 thoughts on “Envy – A Tanka”

    • Thank you, you should try, they are really fun to write. Their form is 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 7 syllables. Its a form that is pretty easy to remember, but makes you think to put them together so that they make sense. I hope you do try them, I would love to read some. :)

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