O’ Calloused Heart (Sonnet)

O calloused heart, how for art thou still beating,

Glances cast at thee thou hath repelled.

Taking flight at thy masters pleading,

How couldst thee in good conscience foretell.

Thou art more beautiful than the rose,

Tho thy thorns art no less deadly.

No more couldst I offer to thee my betrothed,

Than to be forthright of mind and steady.

Nay–this was not enough,

Thy blood and soul hast proved tainted.

Coarse is thine heart when passions in the rough,

Dante’s tragedy to my core hath been painted.

Were thou only more gentle of spirit, more tender and kind,

In my true love thou wouldst bath and no truer love wouldst thou find.

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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

Comments

15 responses to “O’ Calloused Heart (Sonnet)”

  1. ShelbyCourtland Avatar

    Hauntingly beautiful! You have a way with words, you do!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you so much Shelby, I really do appreciate it. :)

  2. Sharmishtha Basu Avatar

    amazing! what a sonnet!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you, I love old English, but I’m never sure if it comes out right.

  3. LorB Avatar

    It sounds just right… Beautifully said…

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much my friend, I’m glad that you enjoyed the poem. :)

  4. Tracesofthesoul Avatar

    Lovely….you got me at “calloused heart”…painfully beautiful.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I appreciate it my friend. :)

      1. Tracesofthesoul Avatar

        I have missed reading your poems…I have lots to catch up on:)

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        I’m not any better, I am so behind it isn’t funny, but I guess that just happens sometimes. :)

      3. Tracesofthesoul Avatar

        Life happens, Dominic! Isn’t it grand that as we age we stay busy still:)

      4. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        Most definitely as a matter of fact I have been so busy lately that I have been neglecting my writing at least to the extent that I would like to write, but what can you do.

      5. Tracesofthesoul Avatar

        Record thoughts here and there…that’s what I have started on my smart phone…I hope you are well.

      6. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        Great idea and actually I am doing really well, I feel like I am in a good place right now. Hopefully I can stay there.

      7. Tracesofthesoul Avatar

        I glad to hear that:)

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