January 28, 2014 The Pregnant Sky (Haiku) 12 Comments The pregnant sky falls Bringing evening into the world ~~ Another day dead ~ ~~ Dominic DiFrancesco ~~ Share this: Share on X (Opens in new window) X Share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest Share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit Email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email Print (Opens in new window) Print Like Loading... Related Posted by Dom DiFrancesco in Poetry Tagged: beauty, day, daytime, dusk, end of the day, evening, haiku, nighttime, peace, poem, sunset
This comes from the odd way that my mind works sometimes. I was questioning whether to use it and then I figured why not. Reply
Pregnant sky is an excellent phrase. Really creates some odd imagery.
This comes from the odd way that my mind works sometimes. I was questioning whether to use it and then I figured why not.
Glad you decided to do it. Love poems like this.
Thank you, I’m glad I did it as well. :)
I love the first 2 lines.
Thank you very much Mirada.
Beautiful Dom :-)
Thank you very much Roxi. :)
These are some interesting metaphors you have combined;)
The first line just came to me and I went from there. I know it is a rather odd one. :)
i like it – very unique. the statement is strong.
Thank you my friend, I appreciate that. :)