January 28, 2014 The Pregnant Sky (Haiku) 12 Comments The pregnant sky falls Bringing evening into the world ~~ Another day dead ~ ~~ Dominic DiFrancesco ~~ Share this: Click to share on X (Opens in new window) X Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest Click to share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email Click to print (Opens in new window) Print Like Loading... Related Posted by Dom DiFrancesco in Poetry Tagged: beauty, day, daytime, dusk, end of the day, evening, haiku, nighttime, peace, poem, sunset
This comes from the odd way that my mind works sometimes. I was questioning whether to use it and then I figured why not. Reply
Pregnant sky is an excellent phrase. Really creates some odd imagery.
This comes from the odd way that my mind works sometimes. I was questioning whether to use it and then I figured why not.
Glad you decided to do it. Love poems like this.
Thank you, I’m glad I did it as well. :)
I love the first 2 lines.
Thank you very much Mirada.
Beautiful Dom :-)
Thank you very much Roxi. :)
These are some interesting metaphors you have combined;)
The first line just came to me and I went from there. I know it is a rather odd one. :)
i like it – very unique. the statement is strong.
Thank you my friend, I appreciate that. :)