April 13, 2013 Emotions Naked – A Tanka 10 Comments Emotions naked Crumpled like dirty laundry Piled on the floor Waiting to be gathered up Washed, folded and put away ~ ~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~ Share this: Click to share on X (Opens in new window) X Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest Click to share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email Click to print (Opens in new window) Print Like Loading... Related Posted by Dom DiFrancesco in Poetry Tagged: containment, emotion, emotions, passion, poem, poetry, raw, tanka
I have some if those currently in a basket needed to be taken downstairs ;). I love this metaphor. Reply
You seem to be more comfortable with these short forms. I prefer your treatment of them to the longer “Vulture” posted later. Well done. Dave Reply
I have some if those currently in a basket needed to be taken downstairs ;). I love this metaphor.
Me too. Thank you. :)
Liked the way you played and mixed one imagery/theme with another.
Thank you very much Eric.
if only it were that easy to wash, fold, and put away emotions … nice thought Dominic
Thank you very much.
You seem to be more comfortable with these short forms. I prefer your treatment of them to the longer “Vulture” posted later. Well done. Dave
Thank you very much, I’m very glad that you liked it.
I love this one, it’s so “current”!
Thank you very much, I’m glad that you liked it. :)