April 13, 2013 Emotions Naked – A Tanka 10 Comments Emotions naked Crumpled like dirty laundry Piled on the floor Waiting to be gathered up Washed, folded and put away ~ ~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~ Share this: Share on X (Opens in new window) X Share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest Share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit Email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email Print (Opens in new window) Print Like Loading... Related Posted by Dom DiFrancesco in Poetry Tagged: containment, emotion, emotions, passion, poem, poetry, raw, tanka
I have some if those currently in a basket needed to be taken downstairs ;). I love this metaphor. Reply
You seem to be more comfortable with these short forms. I prefer your treatment of them to the longer “Vulture” posted later. Well done. Dave Reply
I have some if those currently in a basket needed to be taken downstairs ;). I love this metaphor.
Me too. Thank you. :)
Liked the way you played and mixed one imagery/theme with another.
Thank you very much Eric.
if only it were that easy to wash, fold, and put away emotions … nice thought Dominic
Thank you very much.
You seem to be more comfortable with these short forms. I prefer your treatment of them to the longer “Vulture” posted later. Well done. Dave
Thank you very much, I’m very glad that you liked it.
I love this one, it’s so “current”!
Thank you very much, I’m glad that you liked it. :)