Dearest Me

Dearest me…

What have you been afraid of all these years?

Just look at all the damage you’ve done!

Your fear of failure caused us to fail.

Your fear of rejection filled us with loneliness.

Your fear of disappointment stymied enjoyment.

Your fear of intimacy sustained our solitude.

Your fear of hurt built our hardened facade.

Your fear of living has stunted our life.

Your fear of dying has fueled an unending search.

Your fear, your fear, our fear…

What more do I want from me?

Have we not shed enough blood,

Given our pound of flesh,

Enough for a lifetime?

Wake up and smell the roses

We’ve been standing in this garden all our life

But we’ve been too afraid to see it.

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~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

 I originally wrote this as my submission for the WDBWP Monday poetry prompt, but then realized it wasn’t the correct form.  I still liked the poem so I thought I would post it anyway.

Comments

11 responses to “Dearest Me”

  1. helenijliu2009 Avatar

    Absolutely correct~~

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you very much. :)

  2. helenijliu2009 Avatar

    Reblogged this on 心藝 遊記 and commented:
    Love more, care more.
    Then the universe will response more love to us.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      So very true my friend, thank you much for the reblog. :)

  3. Tracesofthesoul Avatar

    This is great! I believe we can write whatever form we are comfortable with…the others were suggestions…very nicely done. It’s is very moving.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you, I had noticed later that it was suggested to write it as an Epistle which is a form I hadn’t done before so I thought why not. Thanks again for the support, I appreciate it.

  4. jrosenberry1 Avatar

    Very well written… And, sadly, sounds all too familiar.

    Enjoy the garden while you may, sir. :)

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Jen, I actually enjoyed writing this one. :)

      1. jrosenberry1 Avatar

        And that’s the most important thing!

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        It certainly is.

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