Filleted flesh from bone
Cut by separations blade
My love so distant
Pain so intense I’m in tears
Draining blood from heart and soul
When will my wounds mend
When will tears finally dry
When will torment end
Reuniting with my love
Never again torn apart
~
~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~
Dom, for a moment there I thought you were talking about fish fillet.
And then things got very deep and I got carried away by the emotion in your words. Very vulnerable!
I nice one.
Thank you, I could talk about filleting fish, but I don’t think it would have the same impact. :)
Wow, Dom. This is absolutely incredible. I love this.
I’m very glad Julian, thank you so much. :)
Love can hurt, but can also be very satisfying…
Most definitely, no argument here.
I appreciate how you make this anguish of separation physical, Dom. That is very powerful.
Thank you Jeremy, this is one of those that sort of came out of nowhere. I’m very glad that you like it.
I do. The ones that come out of nowhere are always pleasant surprises, aren’t they? :-)
They certainly are, I find this happening more and more and I can’t say that I am unhappy about it. :)
That’s great. I think that is what we want as writers and artists. :-)