November 26, 2014 Blue Skies And Fair Winds (Senryu) 6 Comments Blue skies and fair winds Pure harmony of nature A lesson to learn ~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~ Share this: Click to share on X (Opens in new window) X Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest Click to share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email Click to print (Opens in new window) Print Like Loading... Related Posted by Dom DiFrancesco in Inspirational, Poetry, Spiritual Tagged: brotherhood, happiness, harmony, humanity, joy, kindness, love, peace, synchronicity
I suppose that it could be either one, there was the opening with nature, but I attempted to related to the human condition. Perhaps I was wrong to call it a senryu. Now I’m not sure what it should have been. :) Reply
Dom DiFrancesco 
Perfect haiku, ticks all the boxes!
Thank you so much Gilly, you are probably right in calling it a haiku.
Oh I see I got that wrong its a senryu!
I suppose that it could be either one, there was the opening with nature, but I attempted to related to the human condition. Perhaps I was wrong to call it a senryu. Now I’m not sure what it should have been. :)
Harmony is indeed a lesson to learn. Beautiful.
Thank you Tiny, I very much enjoyed writing this one. :)