Sky-born droplets stream
Through riverbeds of life
Soaking to the skin
Looking towards heaven above
Awestruck…are these tears for me
~
~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~
Sky-born droplets stream
Through riverbeds of life
Soaking to the skin
Looking towards heaven above
Awestruck…are these tears for me
~
~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~
I really like this Dom, the question…the pause. Really beautiful.
Thank you so much, I like how this one turned out, everything just fell into place. :)
Hi, I read “Tears for Me.” Great Tanka! Wonderful imagery of rainy-day blues. Read one of my poems: http://adriannetu.wordpress.com/2013/07/21/the-smell-of-money/
Thank you very much, I loved your poem and I appreciate you visiting mine. :)