My Spirits Journey (Tanka)

My spirits journey

Visited ad nauseum

Questions no answers

Unresolved for a lifetime

A mystery ‘til the end

~

~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~

 

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9 responses to “My Spirits Journey (Tanka)”

  1. Roxi St. Clair Avatar

    Good one!

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      Thank you Roxi. :)

  2. Bastet Avatar

    the spirits journey
    is a never-ending road
    through past and present
    but it is the here and now
    that saves us from illusion

    you inspired a tanka hope you don’t mind.

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      This is a wonderful tanka, I don’t mind at all. :)

      1. Bastet Avatar

        I’m glad you liked it as it was to be a tribute to your great poem! :-)

  3. words4jp Avatar

    A journey to somewhere – but not knowing where exactly. We just go….. On faith? With hope? With love? No one ever knows till the end. xx

    1. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

      I realize that we all realize that we can really never know our fate until the end, but it is something that I think about very often and something that I love to write about. Thank you for the nice comment my friend. :)

      1. words4jp Avatar

        i am happy that you do write about it – i find that many times I do think about it but my head gets caught up in all the mess and blah, whereupon i should just relax and not think too hard and too seriously. You write about this subject with a grace that i lack – so I need you to continue writing about it so i can relax and read your thoughts:) kinda like letting you do all the work, but not really:) xx

      2. Dom DiFrancesco Avatar

        That is really nice of you to say. I will keep writing about it (mostly because I can’t help myself) and I don’t mind doing the work, this kind of work I truly enjoy. :)

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