Take Me As Your Own

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11 responses to “Take Me As Your Own”

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   sueddie

   September 19, 2015

   Nice!

   Simple,  crisp and on point!

   Were you particularly adhering to a style or some metre or so? Asking because I think ‘your own’ could have been ‘yours’.

   But no matter what, I like this and I take the poem as mine too. :)

   Nice Sir Dom! 

   From:”Black and Write” Date:Sat, 19 Sep, 2015 at 20:52 Subject:[New post] Take Me As Your Own

   Dom DiFrancesco posted: “Take me as your own Envelop me with your love I need nothing else I was destined to be yours Since the beginning of time   ~~ Dominic R. DiFrancesco ~~”

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      Dom DiFrancesco

      September 19, 2015

      Thank you for the nice comment my friend. This was written in the tanka form 5-7-5-7-7. I write a lot of these both singularly and nested as I happen to love the form.

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         sueddie

         September 20, 2015

         Makes sense. I will try to experiment too. Looks good.
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         Dom DiFrancesco

         September 21, 2015

         Thank you.
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   Heartafire

   September 19, 2015

   Beautiful!

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      Dom DiFrancesco

      September 19, 2015

      Thank you so much Holly. :)

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         Heartafire

         September 19, 2015

         My pleasure!
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         Dom DiFrancesco

         September 19, 2015

         :)
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   writersdream9

   September 19, 2015

   Great! Lucky lady!!

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      Dom DiFrancesco

      September 19, 2015

      Thanks Carol, I keep teller her that, but she just laughs. :)

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         writersdream9

         September 19, 2015

         :D

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